Jan 24
Don’t worry. This one isn’t finished, but it took me forever just to get it to this point so I’m just posting it as is. I’ll finish it tomorrow morning. I’m trying a completely different method of working so there’s a lot of experimentation. You may notice that chapter three has jumped ahead in time a bit. Just experimenting with a little non-linear storytelling. All will be explained before long. This way just seemed more interesting.
This is just to test and make sure commenting works.