Comments on: Nutter http://www.thefarreaches.com/comics/nutter/ An Epic Adventure in the Far Reaches of Space Wed, 08 Feb 2012 05:55:21 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: Outlandish http://www.thefarreaches.com/comics/nutter/comment-page-1/#comment-1869 Outlandish Wed, 11 Mar 2009 00:56:23 +0000 http://www.thefarreaches.com/2009/02/27/nutter/#comment-1869 Fixed it! Fixed it!

]]> By: Outlandish http://www.thefarreaches.com/comics/nutter/comment-page-1/#comment-1868 Outlandish Wed, 11 Mar 2009 00:29:03 +0000 http://www.thefarreaches.com/2009/02/27/nutter/#comment-1868 Oh snap! Thanks for catching that one. That's the third time I've let counsel slip for council. :mrgreen: Oh snap! Thanks for catching that one. That’s the third time I’ve let counsel slip for council. :mrgreen:

]]> By: zeonxavier http://www.thefarreaches.com/comics/nutter/comment-page-1/#comment-1867 zeonxavier Tue, 10 Mar 2009 23:30:06 +0000 http://www.thefarreaches.com/2009/02/27/nutter/#comment-1867 Just in case, did you mean "counsel tower" or "council tower"? There is a difference... Great comic, by the way! Just in case, did you mean “counsel tower” or “council tower”? There is a difference… Great comic, by the way!

]]> By: TheDeepDark http://www.thefarreaches.com/comics/nutter/comment-page-1/#comment-1829 TheDeepDark Thu, 05 Mar 2009 03:27:04 +0000 http://www.thefarreaches.com/2009/02/27/nutter/#comment-1829 Harken to the Dark Lord of the Sheep! He will guide you in ... well, a direction. o.0 Yay for randomness (especially of a green chicken)! This is the great thing about falling - the only real problem is the sudden stop at the end. :twisted: Harken to the Dark Lord of the Sheep! He will guide you in … well, a direction. o.0
Yay for randomness (especially of a green chicken)!
This is the great thing about falling – the only real problem is the sudden stop at the end. :twisted:

]]> By: Outlandish http://www.thefarreaches.com/comics/nutter/comment-page-1/#comment-1816 Outlandish Tue, 03 Mar 2009 04:19:18 +0000 http://www.thefarreaches.com/2009/02/27/nutter/#comment-1816 Oh good. I was hoping the monologue would improve it. I'd like to do a little more narrative. My favorite type of humor is the British Wodehouse/Pratchett/Hitchhiker's Guide style of narrative, which is hard to do in a comic without having a sort of narrative in captions. I want to do more of that. But I love the Dark Lords of the Sheep. I even like the name. Or nigh-psychotic cyber sheep. It's all them. But beware. There is a madness to my madness or rather my method. Or something. As for the role of the cyber sheep, we'll just have to wait and see, but they're definitely like seasoning. Too much of them is no good, but a dash here or there is perfect. :mrgreen: Oh good. I was hoping the monologue would improve it. I’d like to do a little more narrative. My favorite type of humor is the British Wodehouse/Pratchett/Hitchhiker’s Guide style of narrative, which is hard to do in a comic without having a sort of narrative in captions. I want to do more of that.

But I love the Dark Lords of the Sheep. I even like the name. Or nigh-psychotic cyber sheep. It’s all them. But beware. There is a madness to my madness or rather my method. Or something. As for the role of the cyber sheep, we’ll just have to wait and see, but they’re definitely like seasoning. Too much of them is no good, but a dash here or there is perfect. :mrgreen:

]]> By: Riverfox237 http://www.thefarreaches.com/comics/nutter/comment-page-1/#comment-1814 Riverfox237 Tue, 03 Mar 2009 01:57:54 +0000 http://www.thefarreaches.com/2009/02/27/nutter/#comment-1814 I agree, the effect is much more clear and dramatic with the inner monologue. ^^ Wonderful touch! XD The cyborg sheep! YES. I love those guys! I'm glad you decided to throw in another cameo of them! The green chicken...I don't even know. It definitely accomplishes the task of a totally random moment! XD Once again, the colors are looking wonderful. ^^ I wonder if the cyborg sheep have an actual purpose to the plotline of the comic, or if they are there out of sheer randomousity and awesomeness? Like adding salt to the macaroni & cheese, not out of necessity, but because it enhances the flavor just so. :grin: I agree, the effect is much more clear and dramatic with the inner monologue. ^^ Wonderful touch!

XD The cyborg sheep! YES. I love those guys! I’m glad you decided to throw in another cameo of them!
The green chicken…I don’t even know. It definitely accomplishes the task of a totally random moment! XD

Once again, the colors are looking wonderful. ^^ I wonder if the cyborg sheep have an actual purpose to the plotline of the comic, or if they are there out of sheer randomousity and awesomeness? Like adding salt to the macaroni & cheese, not out of necessity, but because it enhances the flavor just so. :grin:

]]> By: Outlandish http://www.thefarreaches.com/comics/nutter/comment-page-1/#comment-1811 Outlandish Mon, 02 Mar 2009 13:26:47 +0000 http://www.thefarreaches.com/2009/02/27/nutter/#comment-1811 Ok, its 5am. I should say you're right. It reads much better. @Bartimaeus Yes, I felt it was about time the dark sheep showed up again. Ok, its 5am. I should say you’re right. It reads much better.

@Bartimaeus Yes, I felt it was about time the dark sheep showed up again.

]]> By: Outlandish http://www.thefarreaches.com/comics/nutter/comment-page-1/#comment-1810 Outlandish Mon, 02 Mar 2009 13:23:41 +0000 http://www.thefarreaches.com/2009/02/27/nutter/#comment-1810 There. Fixed it. You're write. It reads much better that way. There. Fixed it. You’re write. It reads much better that way.

]]> By: Outlandish http://www.thefarreaches.com/comics/nutter/comment-page-1/#comment-1809 Outlandish Mon, 02 Mar 2009 13:13:32 +0000 http://www.thefarreaches.com/2009/02/27/nutter/#comment-1809 Ooo! Thanks for the proofreading. Let me fix that. I always need a little help in that direction. :mrgreen: Ooo! Thanks for the proofreading. Let me fix that. I always need a little help in that direction. :mrgreen:

]]> By: Kriz http://www.thefarreaches.com/comics/nutter/comment-page-1/#comment-1808 Kriz Mon, 02 Mar 2009 12:53:42 +0000 http://www.thefarreaches.com/2009/02/27/nutter/#comment-1808 :cool: I'm going to have to try that writing exercise. Now I'm putting my proofreader's hat on: The second sentence on this page refers to "what it focuses on," and the fact that the "it" must refer to the "mental focus" really doesn't work well. Just try swapping out the pronoun: it comes out "what mental focus focuses on." Nuh-uh. Or, one could substitute "you" for the pronoun: "what you focuses on." Even worse! I'd suggest saying "what you focus on ... that you're going to leave" as a substitute. /proofreading Keep having fun, Ger! :cool: I’m going to have to try that writing exercise.

Now I’m putting my proofreader’s hat on: The second sentence on this page refers to “what it focuses on,” and the fact that the “it” must refer to the “mental focus” really doesn’t work well. Just try swapping out the pronoun: it comes out “what mental focus focuses on.” Nuh-uh. Or, one could substitute “you” for the pronoun: “what you focuses on.” Even worse!

I’d suggest saying “what you focus on … that you’re going to leave” as a substitute.

/proofreading

Keep having fun, Ger!

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