Comments on: [Comic 227] Or

By: Outlandish

Outlandish — Thu, 13 Nov 2008 00:24:40 +0000

Yeah, I had thought about that. I didn’t have much time for this one, but I should add a little inset panel showing his reaction to Frak. His expression in panel two was reacting to Bentley’s solving things. But you’re right it needs an extra panel. Thankfully it’s not really done yet and it’s easy enough to change it. Thanks for the input!

By: Wanderer

Wanderer — Thu, 13 Nov 2008 00:12:55 +0000

Hey! I like it, but IMMHO, I think you should draw Gilrec face with a more surprised look in the second pannel, or maybe draw a new one after that. I don’t think his WHOA is very convincing. But, anyway, I’m just a guy who can’t draw for his own life.

By: TheDeepDark

TheDeepDark — Wed, 12 Nov 2008 17:02:37 +0000

Yeah somehow I don’t see the “So, which is it? That seems like a pretty crucial conjunction to me.” tack really doing any good with our -short- tempered friend, Frak.

By: Outlandish

Outlandish — Wed, 12 Nov 2008 16:08:38 +0000

Oops! You’re so right. Count on me to miss stuff like that. I’ll fix it after I do the backgrounds and repost. Thanks so much for catching it.

By: Helpful

Helpful — Wed, 12 Nov 2008 15:59:35 +0000

Oops, typo: brake is not break
what an amazing coincidence my uncle should come in and -brake- break off the engagement