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Nov 12
OK, here’s the final version of the comic and I’d say it came out really nice. The backgrounds took some time as is often the case with backgrounds. And I fixed all the dialog errors (I think.) Hope you enjoy it.
Of course you can’t have a Wodehouse inspired group of characters without some overbearing, angry guy saying the line about pulling off your head and making you swallow yourself. I adjusted it for Frak, but it’s like in so many Jeeves books. There’s also a reference from one of my favorite Disney flicks.
Oops, typo: brake is not break
what an amazing coincidence my uncle should come in and -brake- break off the engagement
Oops! You’re so right. Count on me to miss stuff like that. I’ll fix it after I do the backgrounds and repost. Thanks so much for catching it.
Yeah somehow I don’t see the “So, which is it? That seems like a pretty crucial conjunction to me.” tack really doing any good with our -short- tempered friend, Frak.
Hey! I like it, but IMMHO, I think you should draw Gilrec face with a more surprised look in the second pannel, or maybe draw a new one after that. I don’t think his WHOA is very convincing. But, anyway, I’m just a guy who can’t draw for his own life.
Yeah, I had thought about that. I didn’t have much time for this one, but I should add a little inset panel showing his reaction to Frak. His expression in panel two was reacting to Bentley’s solving things. But you’re right it needs an extra panel. Thankfully it’s not really done yet and it’s easy enough to change it. Thanks for the input!